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It's Rhyme Time
Ok, there is a lens, new this day, which is fun to play,
and there is a challenge in store, that will keep you coming back for more...
Enter in this post your best rhyme,
the one you love the most.
It could be a poem, or a limerick,
or a simple rhyme about Nome.
ok that was terrible, but it was off the cuff as I sit in the buff -
you didn't need to know that I know
but it got your attention and just goes to show
that a little rhyme is good for the soul
and the challenge my friends is the ultimate goal.
So, lay down your utterances of rhyme here in this topic and from time to time
I'll choose those that stir up a giggle and make my belly wiggle for inclusion in the lens.
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Litany of Longing
On this chair I’m sitting
Seeming
Lost but it’s you I’m watching
Giving
Way to my imaginings
With pen and ink I’m etching
This Litany of Longing
Could I kiss those lips?
Not just simply pressing
But tasting
Tonguing and Sampling
Those lips not too full
But with a hint of decadence
Lingering with the scent of my essence
Tonguing wet trails
Touching every sense
Creating delights intense
And YES!!
I want that touch
Calloused fingering
Feeling, caressing
Savoring the moistening
Along the edging
From the well its pouring
Probing, stroking
Muscles layering, contracting
Meeting, melting, pulsing
Body parts flavoring
This desire fueled by your absence
The flower opening
Releasing pungent essence
This litany of longing
That I’m penning
Seems inadequate for describing
The brain scrambling
Electrifying
Desire flowing
I’m looking
At your ebony skin glistening
With sweating
Little rivulets trickling
Feeling muscles bunching
Tensing with the straining
Disjointed hips undulating
Ramming jamming
Eyes not closing
For fear of losing
These wonderful sightings
I can hear the deep rumbling
The geyser erupting
Gutteral groanings
Heartbeats subsiding
Restful sleeping
But before we get there
I know I’m obsessing
But could once again
Those lips I be kissing?
c.Dec 9 2003. Gina Rey Forest. All rights reserved. www.forestfirep.com
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I wrote this poem for my Auto Vases,
it is on the card and is attached to it.
I thought it a great road rage poem.
I hope you all enjoy it!!!
"Flower Power"
The Essence Of The Flower
Flows Into You
And Takes You To A Meadow
Where The Senses Are Calm And Clear
Unfolding Petals Into Peace Of Mind
Poem By: Sarah Elizabeth Othman
http://www.donationsforinvention.com
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My Pickle Poem
Eat a pickle, feel so young
It will tickle on your tongue
Pickles are so very green
And so terrifically keen
If you want a crunchy thrill
Eat this big green garlic dill
A bedtime pickle provides true slumber
So snack alot on "The Cucumber"
(it's a work in process for those deeply intellectual moments...
When I'm working, I'm thinkin' of a gherkin....
Love your lens- Lilly
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Boom
Come join me and play,
Not in mud but in the clay.
Make your pots strong and sound,
cause this potter has found.
With wall smooth and sturdy,
with no fear getting dirty.
Sit at the wheel,
forget your next meal.
A bowl found at center
will not suddenly splinter.
But that bowl must get drier
cause when it is tested by fire
In a kiln hot and glowy
Although the ware is quite showy
The work it is doomed.
opps, the pot goes boom.
- KilnGoddess(expert at pottery not poetry)
Last edited by KilnGoddess (11/24/2006 1:27 am)
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Hey well while everyone is into rhyming LOL Here is my attempt!
I happened across Squidoo one day,
Its lens's drew me in,
A library of fun and useful stuff
So I decided to begin...
I joined Squidoo and very soon,
Was building lenses to,
The experience was squidefinatly good
My list of lenses grew
And so if you want, or should you need,
A place to tell your tale and smile,
To share your knowledge, have a laugh
And learn stuff all the while...
A place full of helpful poeple/friends
A shopping mall of great ideas and things to do
Just pay a visit ...Yes youv'e guessed
Come visit OUR SQUIDOO
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Hello Rusty! What a lovely idea for a lens and a message here!
I wrote this poem for my daughter's 16th birthday.
Today my daughter turns sixteen
Much of her day, will be routine
She’ll go to school, she’ll see her friends
It’s only me this time transcends
I see my baby, almost grown
With lipstick now, and sweet cologne
From infant into womanhood
Doing the things, I knew she could
Through all of time, we mothers watch
As time carves yet another notch
We laugh, we cry, we know it’s true
That she’ll see things we never do
The cycle turns, the days slip by
Passing, like blinking of an eye
I do not weep, I do not mourn
The aging of this child, last born
I smile at her, she smiles at me
I know this is how things should be
To future bright, I send this dove
Forever feathered with my love
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Squidiferous submissions my really rhyming rhymesayers!
Currently lilly's pickle poem and littleliz's squidoo poem are featured on the Rhyme Time lens, I'll feature some of the other great poems here in the coming weeks.
Keep 'em coming!
Let's give Lilly and Littleliz a little Squidoo love by visiting their great lenses too! ![]()
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Itz been some time - nearly two years in fact, since a rhyme has graced these halls, or walls if you prefer, or post if you really want to be correct the most.
For our host here in the land of Rhyme Time says it is high time to accept more submissions if he doth have your permissions.
In other words, my fair squidizens please add more of your fine rhymes here; I'd like to add them to my lens. Unless of course you'd rather just buy me a Mercedes Benz.
So take some time, think of a rhyme, then wine and dine me, or whine and pine me if you so feel the need - just know your poems will help Room to Read, and maybe begin to feed the hungry minds of youth across the world.
Alas my foray is done, I hope you at least had some fun, but don't forget to give me your pun... Rhyme Time: Rhyming Poetry and Playful Puns alas, I expire, I am done.
once again that was fun, oh no I can't stop....pop! Anybody want a peanut? Stop it I mean it!!
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Cool... now here is a rhyme.. a chant we did yesterday when Squidoo was down. With this chant and improvised altar Squidoo was revived.
Thread: Panic Thread
The chant:
"oh we beseech thee oh mighty Gil
to look down upon us from your hill
bring us back our beloved dashboard
have pity we are all oh so bored
oh we beseech thee oh mighty Gil
our beloved workshop is not back still
how many hours do we have to endure
we cannot last long that's for sure
oh we beseech thee oh mighty Gil
make us not jump from our window sill
we cannot stand it much longer
the boredom is getting stronger and stronger
oh we beseech thee oh mighty Gil
surely you must know how we feel
we all need our beloved workshop
before our hearts come to a complete stop
oh we beseech thee oh mighty Gil
please bring us back our only thrill
accept this sacrifice of ten virgins
yes, you can share it with Seth Godin"
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What do you think?
"The blue moon on a gray lagoon is just the sight for a loon in flight," Miss Ross said, lying on the bed.
"Don't think you can just wink at me with that frippery."
Mr. Fayette took a cigarette and lit it, then spit. He kept his look inside his book.
Miss Ross was at a loss for what to do next, and vexed.
"I'll soften your words, the way I often have in the past. You're anger won't last."
Sharp laughter came after her reply, and she sighed.
"My heart belongs to another," he said. "Go home to your mother."
She did not move. She'd prove him wrong, before long.
(This is part of a longer piece.)
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
I Squidoo
Do You?
lol
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Portable_eBay wrote:
Cool... now here is a rhyme.. a chant we did yesterday when Squidoo was down. With this chant and improvised altar Squidoo was revived.
Thread: Panic Thread
The chant:
"oh we beseech thee oh mighty Gil
to look down upon us from your hill
bring us back our beloved dashboard
have pity we are all oh so bored
oh we beseech thee oh mighty Gil
our beloved workshop is not back still
how many hours do we have to endure
we cannot last long that's for sure
oh we beseech thee oh mighty Gil
make us not jump from our window sill
we cannot stand it much longer
the boredom is getting stronger and stronger
oh we beseech thee oh mighty Gil
surely you must know how we feel
we all need our beloved workshop
before our hearts come to a complete stop
oh we beseech thee oh mighty Gil
please bring us back our only thrill
accept this sacrifice of ten virgins
yes, you can share it with Seth Godin"
Oh...that's good. I think I'll add some graphics, enlarge it to poster size, and frame it above my computer!!!
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Today was the day
I was going to pull away
and Not Squidoo!
I had other things to do
Wash the clothes and mop the floor,
grocery store and clean some more
Cook a meal for a change
Wipe the dust off the range
Squidoo has taken over my life
I'm not being a very good wife!
Nothing has been the same
since that day Squidoo got my name!
Today was the day
I was going to pull away
and Not Squidoo!
Hey just one peek won't hurt a thing
Then I'll scrub and scrub that stain.
I'll just pop in for only a sec
Then I'll sweep the entire deck.
I'll study my dashboard to see how I've done
Checking my stats is always fun!
Then check my email and I should have known
There was a note from my sister, Joan!
Go to this forum and go right now!
They're all writing poems and they really know how!
Rusty Quill has a lens called "A Rhyme A Day"
Which is really neat, I've got to say!
I'll just peek in and take a quick look
It shouldn't take long, it's not a book!
But what do I do--I begin to write
Now I'm still here and my house is a site!
Squidoo, you've got me hooked really bad
Surely it'll pass and is only a fad..
My hubby is jealous and getting mad
My home is really looking very sad!
But I love to Squidoo so what can I say?
Those household chores will wait one more day!
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lol lol lol Ohme! you are a hoot! I love u, u creative genius! (and my sister, too!)
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Okay, Joan -- this one is for you. (Because your poem inspired me!)
A-tisket, a-tasket
Another lens in the basket!
I wrote a sad poem for U
But I deliberately deleted it.
I deleted it, I deleted it,
And I deliberately deleted it.
So I wrote it again,
And hit submit...
And ask, who started it?
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Ouch.
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lol Brenda!! Funny! ![]()
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There’s a guy on Squidoo called Rusty Quill
Who came up with a lens he thinks is brill
Rhyme a few words and he’ll choose the best
For inclusion in his special poetry quest.
So out they poured, from the modest and the vain
The sickly sweet, and the profoundly mundane
The clever play and startling wit
The pleading sobs and other s**t
Which amuses and entertains no doubt
But frankly, mostly lacks the clout.
I jest of course, for many are clever
No offence intended, now or never.
Forgive my profanity, it’s really bad form
But I swear like a trooper, that’s my norm
Hail fellow poets, write, write, applaud and clap
Oh, bugger it, I can’t keep up this cr*p!
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Now that one really did make me Laugh Out Loud! Great job, Bard.
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Ahh, magnifique, fantastique! What can I say I'm at a loss, I just can't speak!
From bard's to brenda's to ryhmes about gil - thay all I say, have me rolling down hills.
OhMe oh my, you've nailed it on the head, as now I take a break from work, to peek to play.. (I should be in bed)
just one look a simple glance, ahhh criminy squidoo's got me on a hook, I can't look askance!
My lines are all a mess, but heck I was never known for my finesse. I love to rhyme or play with words a past time that makes me feel quite well, just seeing such fine words within this post makes me shiver like a piece of toast after it has seen a ghost.... ![]()
But back to work, alas for me - just wanted to stop in and say what fine participation, without hesitation I must put some on the lens - I'll let you all know when changes have been made - for now I'm off to bed to get, um *beeeep*
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It's almost 1 I should be in bed,
but I fell on the floor and hit my head!
I shouldn't have been in our damn shed,
or posting in this damn rhyming thread.
But I got sucked in like some others, you see,
but I drank too much and in this I had to be,
Now you've got me playing my Nintendo Wii,
in the hope that you'll see my awesome Mii.
A light bulb just blew, oh dear!
The time for me to leave is near.
I won't post here again, I fear,
and that, my friend, must leave you in tears.
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I'm delighted RustyQuill that you visited Si'mibio. Your visit is the talk of the town (well it would be if we had one) and your name has been added to the special commerative plaque of notable tourists).
Please send a tenner at your earliest convenience to recieve our t-shirt and mug and other tat. (The proceeds will go towards our landing strip and pay overdue wages).
On behalf of the Si'mibio tourist authority...
Thanks, and next time please don't trash the hotel - we had a heck of a job cleaning up!
Paul ![]()
PS please return the towels
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Well, the judges have dithered all too long so they withered,
but in the end a decision was made -
I picked the one's that struck a chord
or made me laugh when I was board,
there is no reward you won't get paid but at least you can say
hey, remember that one day... while you sit upon your bidet.
OhMe oh my her poem about Squidoo - a perfect capture of my own rapture,
and The Bard what can I say - it twas a family friendly lens, once upon a time until your reference to the reason for the fore mentioned bidet...
Great additions I still have to say - I welcome more from any rhymesayers looking to play - don't make me come back in another two years - I will - to come kick your rears, or box your ears!
So, alas I'm done, no more rhymes from the cuff, I'll go back to sitting in the dark in the buff, and wait for another rhyming submission that I'll use with your permission on the wonderful world of Rhyme Time.
oh, and Paul AKA The Bard - you can tell the tourist authority I will return the towels when they pay my hospital bill for the dysentery I got from the clam chowder... I do apologize for the condition of the hotel, again it wasn't pleasant for me either. ![]()
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Rusty-Quill wrote:
oh, and Paul AKA The Bard - you can tell the tourist authority I will return the towels when they pay my hospital bill for the dysentery I got from the clam chowder... I do apologize for the condition of the hotel, again it wasn't pleasant for me either.
How pleased I am that you did see
the playful nature of my poetry
Tongue in cheek, your praise appears
But inclusion on the lens brings jolly cheers
Si'mybio salutes your mighty nib
all else is nothing but mere glib
Keep the towels as a mere token
The waiters been fired - I have spoken.
The silly sod thought you asked for lamb
But he was drunk with too much dram
I trust your bowels are now in trim
My toilet jokes are fairly thin
But remember next time you have a cr*p
We'll always remember you as a decent chap.
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